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Alone at sunset in a barren land
beneath slate sky and ancient stars.
Marked out by an infernal brand
fields of Venus by the paths of Mars.

Held to a driven quest
of demonic aim and devine intent.
No hope, no reason, no reward, no rest.
When leaving Eden all roads are bent

With heart on fire and blood like ice
Freinds and enemies, loss and gain
lies and truth, cats and mice.
Treat these imposters just the same

Adrift with purpose on a darkling sea.
I thought that I percieved my role
Wise of what is, let the future be.
A Flying dutchman of the soul.

As days light faded into night
a reflection settled on my brain.
Scarred by life, needing respite
Twilight Angel on wings of pain.

Across bind time,sister of my soul
sing your songs and take my hand,
Unlooked,I found you and am whole.
Together sunrise on a verdant land
©2006-2009 ~sickofpissingabout
:iconsickofpissingabout:

Author's Comments

my condition and feelings at a crossroads. and meeting my great love.
allthough I am happy that it puts across these things quite well I feel that parts of it are unweildly and would welcome any suggestions.

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:iconevil-teddy-bear:
hey... i like this one too... :-) you're all talent ian!!! great job!!!
:iconsickofpissingabout:
Thanks I think my head is big enough though, don't you?...haha :venox:I still think my stuff needs some polish. but thanks again.

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Do I look like a fuckin' people person?
:iconfenidia:
...nice

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squirells are Suicidal two...shouldn't they get Psychologists as well?
:icononfiretoday:
Very nicely done, holds together strong and doesn't make me bleed out my eyes (a risk I take virtually everytime I click on some poetry).

Keep up the good work!
:iconsickofpissingabout:
thak you muchly i f you bleed from your eyes a lot you should really see a doctor :ambulance:

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Do I look like a fuckin' people person?
:icononfiretoday:
I did, he said it was side effect that often follows viewing the literature of 14 year old scene kids.
:iconcuisle-mo-croidhe:
I really like this, I am gonna fave it, Mena

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Hope - Bauhaus

Your mornings will be brighter
Break the line
Tear up rules
Make the most of a million times no
:iconsickofpissingabout:
thank you very much Mena.
and may i say that carbon emissions were kept to a minimum during the writing of this poem.
:sunnysideup:

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Do I look like a fuckin' people person?
:iconcuisle-mo-croidhe:
Well, that is a good thing, nobody wants carbon in thier poems, :)

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Hope - Bauhaus

Your mornings will be brighter
Break the line
Tear up rules
Make the most of a million times no

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